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[W r i t e r' s N o t e b o o k]
Sketches of Those We Have Known: We have been with them.
The woman had lived a long life peering through cruel and painful eyes. Her face was creased by long and deep lines. She now looked at the young man standing in front of her as though he had just leapt from one of those lines.
"You can't dream in this world- your mind'll take you away places but soon enough you'll run into a wall of disgust. Then what? You haven't walked through hell yet. I've walked through my hell!" And she laughed wildly like a neighing horse. "Everything's gone and what do I have to show for anything? Can you answer me that? The brain can go anywhere, so what? Where does it lead in the end? There are big dreams but actions are what speak to me. Not words but actions!"
He listened to her as he would listen to an immigrant who had stopped him to ask for directions. He searched for an answer that would please her.
"See...you can't answer. You can't answer because you don't know. And now people are asking questions about you. 'What is he up to? Where does he go?' Doesn't that bother you?"
He smiled. "Everyone should ask questions."
"Well, they want answers."
He walked across the room and stood before the window looking down at a couple walking down the court holding hands. Opposite the window a door opened and a child ran down steps to the sidewalk, ran across the court and under the window where a dog lay on the lawn.
He had passed the child many times on his way back from the Oakland library. The child was always with toys but always alone and now the boy sat by the dog and scratched under its ear.
He left the window and turned toward the old woman.
"No one wants to embarrass his family. But neither does a man growing in a family want to feel the measure of that family over his head. Especially if those measurements are false to his own instincts. Next time someone asks you tell them that this is an age of the wise dreamer; that no longer will the wise dreamer be miserable clown in the world he shares with everyone else. That even to begin to be such a wise dreamer one must strip themselves of all the vanities that drive them into hells of the collective making. The wise dreamer must use ever faculty and break free from the momentum of death. He must realize that every slight dream human beings have had the past thousands of years are coming to material fruition. See, even now, how the world pales before its own inventions."
The old woman laughed the laugh of surrender. "A talker all right, you're a talker."
"You see! I'm only against the ugliness and power humans have unleashed against themselves."
"Words again."
"Yes, I limit myself to them. It is a simple and humble occupation and yet what if the tale teller or the wiseman decide to create a Hitler or an Atilla rather than their dreams? What if he sets in front of hungry and
superstitious humanity a dream that will produce a Hitler? Wouldn't that be an evil act of revenge?"
"They'll try to knock you down."
"I'm no longer interested in 'they.' 'They' are a dispirited lot who need help."
"Awful sure of yourself."
"I have a sense of humor."
"Don't make yourself out to be something you're not."
"I have severe limitations."
"And all this talk about wiseman, dreamer?"
"That is an entryway into tales and songs."
She smiled. "I'm with you, don't get me wrong. I'm for you. But you know...the way you've lived."
"I have lived, like other young people, in the vast catacombs of hallucination. Even now I worry that I will not find the form worthy of them." He now spoke rapidly. "You see, Americans have a Daniel Boone complex that makes them forge into the woods where no one has gone before. Perhaps, even, it is a value that is ruinous to carry in this age. But are there not woods within us that make us fear?" He laughed and then looked sad. "Perhaps it's just television."
"Well, don't go to be a martyr for this."
There was nothing like ugly rumors spread about her
because people were really sophisticated on this little
court and could care less whether she walked up and down
the sidewalk at midnight or whether she always seemed alone
or whether she was living in probably the worst house in
the neighborhood. They really didn't give it any notice since
there were so many other more spectacular attractions and
diversions in life then looking for oddities in the neighborhood; just
as long as she kept eccentricities to herself and
by displaying them didn't interfere with anyone's pursuit
of happiness or anyone's particular desire.
Only once had anything resembling friction occurred and
that's when several of the neighbors organized a street
fair. They printed flyers and stuffed them in mailboxes
and tacked them on every telephone pole on the court and
asked anyone with any particular talent to be brave enough
to show it. There would be games and food and music and
stories and a chance for everyone in the neighborhood to
get to know one another. So the day finally arrived and
as it approached noon more and more of the neighbors
had collected together to share food and dance a bit on the
court. It was in full swing an hour later. Children
yelling and clapping their hands over simple games and men
standing around trying to find something important to talk
about and all the women talking and moving about clusters
of people, taking one conversation and mixing it with the
next one and relaying certain contents of the next conversation
to be taken up in another one.
She had forgotten all about the fair. That morning
she had gotten out of bed with one thought in her mind
and that was to hurry downtown and see the new movie that had
come out by the German film maker, Herzog, who had become a
kind of guiding saint for her. His films always seemed
to be expressly for her and though she knew otherwise she
still believed it was so. His films were about the frenzy
of loneliness which she knew very well.
She was waiting in the window, face turned toward the
street below, watching two dogs leaping in the middle of
a group of children.
She sat for a long while half-fiddling with her black
hair and thinking about the children down on the little
court which ended at the large two storied, rather run-down
house she had rented now for two years.
The white dress she was to wear that afternoon lay
across a cushion on her bed. The house was really a wreck
of a place but she didn't mind as long as the owner promised,
as he did every six months, that he'd paint it, seal the
cracks, install new appliances, repair the broken fence in
the backyard, cut the weeds that grew out of a once
flourishing lawn and anything else that was necessary to
prevent accidents or otherwise make the place worthy of
living in as it once had been.
It was not so easy since her husband had left and
with her brother now moving in, it made it twice as difficult.
The brother was a wandering fool who had no respect for
anything much less the rather delicate situation she had
made for herself. But it was none of her
business to keep her brother away if he really needed a place
to stay. And he had promised to move along in a few weeks
when the business he had in the city came to a close. She
wasn't sure what the business was; he'd been vague on the
telephone, even distant, as if really he was embarrassed about
the whole thing.
So much beauty in the little children, she thought.
They were really half- naked creatures who were teasing the
two dogs into a kind of playful frenzy. They're such beautiful
little things, she thought again. They belonged to neighbor's
several houses down the little court who really thought her
to be an odd one, the way she would walk up and down at
night, up and down the little court as if she were going
someplace but always stopping and retracing her steps as if
really she had no place to go and it went on for an hour or
more, pacing up and down the sidewalk apparently for no
reason and dressed all in tight fitting black pants and a
leather fringed jacket and when someone passed her she'd
become startled and say in a rather halting kind of voice,
"Oh, not you" and go her way.
Now, as she dressed, she could hear the laughter of
children and the sound of music from the street and in her
curiosity she went to her window and was startled to see
the neighborhood collected almost directly below her. Then
she remembered the fair and remembered that she had forgotten
it thinking that it would never come off; that people living
in cities never did such things and, at any rate, it was
very sentimental and look, she thought to herself, the way
the dogs are eating off the tables and all those foolish
woman gaggling over nothing. But it startled her nonetheless
to see so many people she had seen individually from time
to time together in one place, in a kind of assent she never
thought possible.
For a moment her mind was taken by a desire to find
another way out of her house so she wouldn't have to walk
in the middle of her neighbors. There were steps leading
to the back and a field and a fence and what was over the
fence was anyone's guess; another yard perhaps with a big
guard dog and when she put her dress on and listened,
the desire for escape became simply another ache.
He could not understand the group. He listened for awhile and then began to dance. Yes, the story he was writing. What was it about? A young man riding in a car listening to hypocrisy. But the boy was not himself. The boy was someplace else, on a hilltop in a large city where everything was happening and there was a kind of ease to the way the hypocrisy occurred like images across a television screen. He felt embarrassed and turned back to the group. "And the woman are happy!" Laughter scattered over his head. Women. There were no women in his story. The group was talking about a clique of girls from the city who ran together with a friend's cousin. He felt his story evaporate in the sound of laughter and a part of him shriveled, with the story, into a barbaric silence over which laid the impunity of the group. Later that day as he took the pages he'd been working on from the brown Manila folder and began to write he stopped and listened to the laughter earlier that afternoon and looked at the curious words he'd written. What means all this? he thought. He looked out the window to the old, desiccated tree in the back that for years had been brown and on the verge but never going completely over to decay. For years it had stood upright, scaly and brown; never once had he seen a green leaf from its limbs. When he looked back to his story the whole thing seemed absurd. Again the laughter; but not from the group... someplace else he couldn't identify and he placed the Manila folder back into his desk and went outside. "She was the guiding one. She was the perfect embodiment of dream without the slightest embarrassment." Back to Top David Eide eide491@earthlink.net © 2002 David Eide. All rights reserved. |